When a family breaks apart and the father leaves without a word, the only child, a weak and sickly teenage boy takes it upon himself to bring back his dad, or he will live with the guilt of his inactivity forever.
Just from looking at your logline, I'm already very intrigued by the idea. I like the idea of the protagnist taking action in his life instead of just sitting there and collecting dust. Maybe flasbacks with father and son? Excited to hear more from this!
This sounds like the kind of story i'd have to read with my girlfriend and a box of kleenex. Will I need a shoulder to cry on after I'm finished reading this story? Anyways. Definitely sounds interesting, try using some stronger adjectives. People like dat.
Just from looking at your logline, I'm already very intrigued by the idea. I like the idea of the protagnist taking action in his life instead of just sitting there and collecting dust. Maybe flasbacks with father and son?
ReplyDeleteExcited to hear more from this!
This sounds like the kind of story i'd have to read with my girlfriend and a box of kleenex. Will I need a shoulder to cry on after I'm finished reading this story? Anyways. Definitely sounds interesting, try using some stronger adjectives. People like dat.
ReplyDeleteI really like the was this sounds. It's interesting and it makes me very interested in seeing what the final product is.
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